Video and digipack feedback

Music Video Feedback
Pros:

•      Editing with the beat is nice and adds some pace to the entire music video, fits nicely with dance convention.   Nice use of colour and lighting- favourite part lights flashing behind black silhouette.
• ·      Very intime.
• ·      Great location and party scene.
• ·      Mise-en-scene quiet appropriate to the genre, camera is controlled.
• ·      I love the shots with horses and also the flashes of light.

• ·      I liked the use of the jump cuts within the beat of the song
• ·      Mise-en-scene was good I could understand what was happening.
• ·      Good use of quick cuts to the beat of the song
• ·      I liked the horse mask, it made the video unique.
• ·      I also liked the shot of the man infront of the light which is slowed down and brings in a sense of tension.
• ·      Good editing with music and shots
• ·      Good use of lighting
• ·      Good editing with beat
• ·      Good transitory between scenes
• ·      Use of people good
• ·      Works well as a music video
• ·      Nice editing- good tempo throughout, keeps with the beat
• ·      I like the silhouette of the dj
• ·      Mise-en-scene: costumes and setting work well with the video
• ·      Camera: good range of shots used
• ·      Editing: quick editing, split screens, works as well
• ·      It does work well as a music video
• ·      Silhouette works well

·   Cons:

• ·      Could used more types of shots.
• ·      Perhaps add more of a variety of shots, the shots become repetitive after a while.
• ·      There wasn’t much of a narrative it has very confusing at times and the jump cuts were a little bit out of sync with the beat of the song.
• ·      At the end of the video the shots speed up with the drop but it is slightly out of time.
• ·      Could improve the party scene, doesn’t look very legit, change the lighting?
• ·      Too dark at some points in the video
• ·      Could improve the party scene, doesn’t look very legit, change the lighting?
• ·      Too dark at some points in the video
• ·      Some shots are a bit fast to see
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Digi- Pack Feedback

• ·      Doesn’t tell much about the video it is a bit random/fun
• ·      Good use of the space available
• ·      Good use of space, everything is quite central
• ·      There is almost to much going on, maybe a bit more simple
• ·      Good handmade feel
• ·      Like use of finger print
• ·      Well spaced out
• ·      Fits with theme of video
• ·      Like the font, would change colour of the background
• ·      Nice idea I like the track numbering and the cover looks fun which suits the genre of music
• ·      Could do with making some of the text easier to read.
• ·      Front and back covers suit the genre
• ·      The fonts are well done
• ·      All space is used well in some way
• ·      Looks professional add all links together
• ·      Good use of space
• ·      Like the confetti and flags but don't see the reason for the fingerprint.
• ·      More variety of colours
• ·      Make it more friendly for the eye to read
• ·      Very welcoming
• ·      The use of fonts is very effective though, the shadowed letters work very well