Audience Research- watching final video

This is a picture of some people who were the audience and age to watch out media product. We linked our laptop up with the T.V and they watched our opening scene twice and than we asked a few questions after, mainly finding things to improve.
There were 3 mains points that we established doing this:
First was flashback wasn't consistent enough. We fixed this by extending the time of the flash back, which is shown by a flash of white on the screen, and we made certain that it went, garage scene, driving, garage scene, driving so that it was a consistent flow.
The next highlighted point, was they thought the music suited the clip very much, and the change in music during the shooting scene created a more tense atmosphere.
The last point was one of the boys picked up that 'manager' was spelt wrong so we had to address this situation immediately which was good that someone picked up on this.